Lydia Schulz
Mr. H. Salsich
9 English
12 November, 2008
The Way to Rainy Mountain
an Essay on Why I Enjoyed "The Way to Rainy Mountian" by N. Scott Momaday
TS: I greatly enjoyed reading “The Way to Rainy Mountain,” by N. Scott Momaday. SD: I was especially partial to the way Momaday described his appreciation for all things small and large. CM: His essay’s topic ranges from the history of his tribe to a cricket in the night. CM: Though many people could boast their appreciation for their heritage, the tone of Momaday’s writing when he talks about the cricket that “had perched upon a handrail,” you can tell that this man cares about living things, big or small. SD: This goes right along with Momaday’s reverence for nature. CM: From his mentioning of “the divinity of the sun” to the way that from “a distance […] the steaming foliage seems almost to writhe in fire,” it is obvious that this man has great respect for nature and life. CM: To him, his grandmother, and his ancestors, the environment is something to love and protect. SD: I was amazed by how close Momaday was with his grandmother. CM: She told him stories, prayed with him, and helped raise him to the man he would become, perhaps not realizing what a colossal influence she was to her grandson. CM: But when you read the way he spoke about what she was like the last time he saw her, you cannot help but see how much Momaday loved and respected his grandmother. CS: Mr. Momaday has proved to be an extremely talented and touching author.
There are so many aspects of N. Scott Momaday’s writing that I enjoy; it is hard to fit them all into one 11-sentence paragraph. His style, his phrasing, and his smooth synchronization from one topic to the next make him really appeal to me as a writer. However, the main part I enjoy about Momaday’s essay is how much of himself he put into it. I wholeheartedly appreciate the fact that I got to read something by this creative and inspiring author.
1 comment:
* "cant" should be "can't"
* A fine opening, Lydia!
* The second CM is a little awkward. Take a close look.
* "goes right along" could be just "goes along" -- look for places to tighten the writing by deleting and/or rearranging
* GOOD WORK WITH FAST WORDS AND 3-ACTION
* a transition to the third chunk would be helpful
* "His style, his phrasing, and his smooth synchronization from one topic to the next" -- SWEET WRITING!
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